Summer music video re-make

This is the Summer re-make video that Me and my class did back in June. We chose the song ''Is this the way to Amarillo'' by - Peter Kay. It is a fairly simple video so we thought re-enacting it wouldn't be so difficult. it was a joyful experience and also quite exciting to see how we could imitate a video. 

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(Mary and Lousia Set 8 Video!)

Three technical strengths of the video and weaknesses

• I think for a first attempt, the editing on the lip syncing matched quite well.
• The way the camera was followed the artist made it look not-so-amateur-ist

Weaknesses - 

•  I think that the edits could have definitely gone with the beats more, it would of looked smoother . 
• The lighting at times, was very dark.